how i see

how i see

A Poem by aftervision
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love

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How I see

 

Her house

Didn’t grow on me

Her house

Grew in me

She changed the heart

Which changed what I see

 

Young with

Package in tow

Brain power impressive

As for a while �" she put on a show

 

She broke down

Over time �" she confided in me

Showed me the picture

That I wasn’t supposed to see

 

It was then �" that I knew

That my forever had arrived

Her worst exchanged �" never to flare up again

Room now �" for heaven in her eyes

 

Her house

Didn’t grow on me

Love �" taught �" love

To grow in me

 

She changed the heart

Which changed

How I see

 

after vision

 

 

© 2010 aftervision


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It's a wonderful thing when one is open to be taught and has room for growth and change. Loving the new perspective.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very beautiful. Exquitiste really. I love this line...

Love " taught " love
To grow in me

Wonderfully done...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this using the house in a way as her and love.
To change one's life, heart is love in any language.
Very beautiful..

Her house

Didn’t grow on me

Love " taught " love

To grow in me

Wonderful lines, shows us love is not always bad.

Chloe



Posted 14 Years Ago



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