blank page

Blank page

 

 

You sent

A blank page

To lay before my pen

 

You gave

Me the moments

To help me live again

 

You timed the touch

The very instant my hearts blood bled

To your blank paper " the one hunger for love

Come closer to me and be fed

 

I write

This picture for you to view

I write the love

Capturing the wind " that blow through

 

Now back to you

And what was once a blank page

Now look at your page

A place my heart poured out for you

 

Read and record

Love as seen by the eyes of my hearts heart

My love " coming back to you"

 

after vision

 

Reviews

[Gheeneil]

To me this spoke about someone who was opening her/his heart out. I was thinking the "blank page" referred to such. It's like giving more than enough room to one person to come in and occupy it. That heart could be barren and only him/her could fill in the emptiness. I just loved the thought of pen and a blank paper. They complement each other or shall I say, complete each other. Keep writing.

[Elwina]

this is lovely. touching and full of love

[Epiph!]

is this dedicated to poetry? it's real nice! love it

[Syndel]

til you come back to me thats all Im gonna do .....this was the first thing I thought of reading this wonderful piece of art I found you never to lose the touch of your pen

[A.Lee]

This is really good. Lovely flow and rhythm and I liked your word choice. It had a peaceful, thoughtful tone to it. Well written.

[Sam Severn]

You have crafted n' created a gem here, aftervision! Love the simple way you laid your feelings on the page. N' I adore the "Now back to you" verse....BEAUTIFUL!! ㋡

[Gomer LePoet]

Your blank page is filled with great thoughts. It is amazing how quickly a blank page becomes many pages of color and images. good job

[Jessica Lewis]

So absolutely perfect. Emotion or passion is always my driving force for artistic expression. Love it!

[The Water Queen]

This is a wonderful read. It has great depth and wonderful flow. Great Job.

[deeps]

This is wonderful, I enjoyed this write alot.