YOU MAKE THIS WORLD A BETTER PLACE

The best time together we have shared 

When the whole world turned their back on me 

You are the only who loved me and who cared 

No matter where my path may turn 
You are always with me 

And you never let my dreams burn 

No matter what my dreams may be 

You always give me hope 

And you help me believe 

You never let me down 

Your crazy jokes make me smile 

You always change my frown 

You are my buddy , my angel and my best friend 

When the whole world disappoints me 

You are the only one who holds my hand 

For me you are not less than a gift  from above 

Who showed me the meaning of love 

You always bring a big smile on my face 

You make this world a better place 

Reviews

[nigrum homonculus]

pretty good. i honestly can't fault it. well done

[Celestial Witch Child]

I really love this, but the rhyming I feel slightly detracts a little from the quality.

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Good flow. Well written. Could do with some punctuation though. Sometimes punctuation can really add to the poem. A very pleasant image though. Well done.

[Kuhr Gred]

wow.. the flow.. like romantic.. :) i love it..
- Kuhr Gred

[Corset]

Just went from s****y s**t to gift from above, lol...it's amazing how some people spread love and some spread hate, ( not meaning yourself just in general outlooks on life) but we all spread. Love this ...

[Wild Willow Blue]

Touching and sweet.

[quixotic_rose]

"The best time together we have shared" At first I thought you were going to describe the 'best time together' that you had shared haha, then I read on and found out that it was just another statement/line to the actual poem. So I'm thinking you should add an 's' on to 'time' and make it 'times' and I think that way it'll make more sense :)
Also: "You are my buddy , my angel and my best friend " you are missing a comma after 'angel' and before 'and'.
Overall it was enjoyable to read and I loved the support and emotion given throughout each stanza. Very nice job :)

[khalid]

nice, sweet and cute poem

[shawlyn]

Hi afra,
This poem is more up beat than others of yours I have read. It is emotional joy about someone who is always there to support you. No matter what! Well done.
Regards
Shawlyn

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well it was good and I can't really say anything that hasn't already. I liked it Great job.