YOU MAKE THIS WORLD A BETTER PLACE

The best time together we have shared 

When the whole world turned their back on me 

You are the only who loved me and who cared 

No matter where my path may turn 
You are always with me 

And you never let my dreams burn 

No matter what my dreams may be 

You always give me hope 

And you help me believe 

You never let me down 

Your crazy jokes make me smile 

You always change my frown 

You are my buddy , my angel and my best friend 

When the whole world disappoints me 

You are the only one who holds my hand 

For me you are not less than a gift  from above 

Who showed me the meaning of love 

You always bring a big smile on my face 

You make this world a better place 

Reviews

[Reform69]

friend zoned someone so hard huh haha jaykay, but no this is a great tribute to a friend/significant other. I hope whoever this was about knows how you feel =)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very nice and sincere, as I can guess from your words :)
There's something I can't actually figure out that links every stanza to the next one.
Very well done =D

[mariah]

allright, i LOVE this! its so....amazing. esspecially that last stanza. thats like your speciallty, the last stanza. you always know how to make it count! nice work :)
-Mariah

[Pax]

nice, keep it up.

[Barbara Walker]

A great tribute to someone special in your life. Hope you let them read it! Nice write!

[Marissa]

very nice I love the emotion.

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

i think everyone has a person in their life, its an emotional, strong, and compelling piece that everyone should read it is great and it is now one of my favorites. i love it!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Aw how cute! Very nice, you express the emotion well. Excellent!

[Krista Weiss]

Really cute! I love it :)

[Ray]

**quick fix** : when you refer to the world, it's either "its" or "his" (if you want to personnalise it, doesn't work with "their".
Very good. I like the before to last stanza. Go on writing like that.