MY LIFE IS HARD

Cursed by the darkness of love

Had a great fall from above

So I feel low

These painful regrets

Wont let me forget

Forget what I have lost

Wishing I could have it back at any cost

This world is filled with lies

They snatch your dreams

And place them on fire

The arrow of lies  hit me so deep

That I cry even when I sleep

It has given me never ending pain

And now these wounds won't heal

Cause they were given by

The people I love

My life is so hard

That its neither passing

Nor ending

Reviews

[~Sara~]

Hello, Afra. You did a great job on this poem! I like how you did some of the structure. I definitely loved the beginning. It grasped my attention and made me want to read more. This was a magnificent poem! Thanks for sharing!
-Sara

[Mazie Tackett]

So emotional and sad I love it

[Olivia Marie]

I loved it, and I especially love your use of "forget" in the second stanza. How you ended one line with it, then started the next line with the same word. Added emphasis to the idea. Not only that but by repeating it, it also acted as an example of itself. Very nice :)

[Krista Weiss]

Love this! It's really sad but I love it anyway :)

[kayla]

I love this poem(: It's beautifully well-written

[shawlyn]

High afra,
You have a style which portrays personal deep emotion which the reader can feel with you. Nice poem which is very much to the point. Keep it up.
Regards
Shawlyn

[Barbara Walker]

Neither passing or ending-just feeling stuck in the same old hurts, from the ones you love. Good write!

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Very well done. I can definitely relate to this and I'm positive that lots of other people can too. I love the words you've chosen and the way you've described things. Very good. :)

[Corset]

it's so difficult sometimes to just accept another day, you have given great voice to how this feels, well done!