MY LIFE IS HARD

Cursed by the darkness of love

Had a great fall from above

So I feel low

These painful regrets

Wont let me forget

Forget what I have lost

Wishing I could have it back at any cost

This world is filled with lies

They snatch your dreams

And place them on fire

The arrow of lies  hit me so deep

That I cry even when I sleep

It has given me never ending pain

And now these wounds won't heal

Cause they were given by

The people I love

My life is so hard

That its neither passing

Nor ending

Reviews

[khalid]

so sad poem but at the same time nice to read..that comes from your way of writing it in a very professional way making the reader feel both ways..the sad music coming from the nice flow and the sweet rhyme...

[Ray]

very...melancholic...
**quick fix** : wont-->won't//its-->it's
well, life is 100% hard, but we can get through. It feels like forever, but then, how can we imagine forever ? Well, had an excellent read.

[JRB]

Darkness and pian often are found in life's existence behind the story told and lived, nice write

[Fabio_Cassilias]

like this one because sometimes life seems hard like we are catching time on our Overtime.

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is a touching and emotional poem.

I love the way you write straight from the heart and soul
with such intense emotional delivery,
with some deep eye-opening metaphors.

I love the two lines in the 1st stanza:
'Had a great fall from above
so I feel low.'

YOU ARE A GROWING MASTER OF SHORT POEMS

WELL DONE!!!!

[nigrum homonculus]

damn this was emotional. i love it well done

[....]

I love this, so well written.

[Laura Maidah]

"it's". It is.
"its" is possessive. I know. I do that ALL the time. So annoying. Lol.

[Pax]

such a sad life,

[Boy of the red]

Love it. Don't change a thing