HIT YOUR GOAL

Don't let your dreams fade 

Love can defeat hate 

Time is just a thief 

Steals happiness and leaves you in grief 

Live like you will die tomorrow 

So don't let yourself die in sorrows 

Forget what you have lost and learn to move on 

No one can break you as long as they know you are strong 

Learn from your mistakes 

But don't let them break you 

Just be real and pure 

So that no one can make you insecure 

Don't give a damn what other people say 

Cause you are beautiful in your own way 

Be the star of your own sky 

You are always a winner as long as you try 

Open your heart and free your soul 

And when the time comes hit your goal 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great job with metrica, I guess I can say without problems, that (at least for the people I know) you're the "queen of the couplets in WC", you just write them so naturally and superbly at the same time. The flow is amazing, and it doesn't hurt AT ALL watching you finally write a "good mood type" of poem !! You make such great works when you do it !!

[mariah]

wow, so very true. time is a theif, therefore we must live as if tomorow was are last day, and live it to the fullest. great job capturing this, you have talent my friend ^.^

[Kuhr Gred]

Time is just a thief
Steals happiness and leaves you in grief
-- > this is a inspiring poem ever I read.. i reminds me.. that Time is Gold.. thanks for sharing this wonderful masterpiece..
- Kuhr Gred

[Ceri]

I love motivational poetry, perks me right up. I'm a big fan of rhyme, too, not enough rhyming in poetry if you ask me, this is flows wonderfully. I love these lines most of all: "Be the star of your own sky/ You are always a winner as long as you try".

[eeoopig]

Good job - an inspirational poem. It sends out good message, but is too happy for my taste; I like dark poems >:) good job on this - amazing

[Katrina Mckeown]

A lovely inspirational poem, one of my favourites...you have a definite talent for writing.

[khalid]

wonderful..really amazing in all its aspects, the message is clear and simple, the words are nicely picked making nice flow and music through all the lines, the rhyme is really nice..moreover the picking of simple words was a smart thing you did, it suits the the poem as a peice of advice..

[Ray]

I am SO very impressed by your writing. Yes, never give up !! I agree with this, and this is a message for everyone out there, starting with everyone on writerscafe : don't be afraid to put your writing up, have confidence that you write real good .... My point is, you voiced what everyone should hear (well "voiced"). Because everyone has hard times and sometimes wants to give up. A little tip : if you yourself are feeling down at times, you should re-read what you wrote, not necessarily only this poem but others as well. I do that a lot, and seeing what I can do can boost me up ! If I wrote that much just for a review, that means I LOVE your writing. I know this is going pretty far but "I'm intoxicated by it" !!!! XD

[V.J.C.]

I liked this poem for the meaning,thanks for the nice read.

[Fabio_Cassilias]

Thank You for This Inspirational Poem.
This one made my day honest..
Speak the Truth Keep Preachin

[Legolas]

Nicely done. Its short and sweet and carries alot of meaning:)