HIT YOUR GOAL

Don't let your dreams fade 

Love can defeat hate 

Time is just a thief 

Steals happiness and leaves you in grief 

Live like you will die tomorrow 

So don't let yourself die in sorrows 

Forget what you have lost and learn to move on 

No one can break you as long as they know you are strong 

Learn from your mistakes 

But don't let them break you 

Just be real and pure 

So that no one can make you insecure 

Don't give a damn what other people say 

Cause you are beautiful in your own way 

Be the star of your own sky 

You are always a winner as long as you try 

Open your heart and free your soul 

And when the time comes hit your goal 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great job with metrica, I guess I can say without problems, that (at least for the people I know) you're the "queen of the couplets in WC", you just write them so naturally and superbly at the same time. The flow is amazing, and it doesn't hurt AT ALL watching you finally write a "good mood type" of poem !! You make such great works when you do it !!

[Nautili]

uplifting and inspirational. I really like the line "Be the star of your own sky." So many people look for somone else to be that star in their sky. That star might burn brightly like a super-nova, and then burn out, leaving only it's trail in the night sky. But if you are your own source of light, it will continue to shine for your whole life.

[Sam Gregory]

I like the structure here, very well written. Nice flow and your words are very inspiring tbh. Keep it up :)

[Whiskurz]

An uplifting piece filled with wisdom.....Bravo my friend.....Whisk

[murrill]

I can realy relate to this poem it sounds like my life as is an will be.

[Dave Webb]

Good poem to start the day with. It puts you in the right frame of mind. NIce job. :)

[Satire69]

don't let your dreams fly away baby! xo and hello

[Skye]

I love this, it flows so amazingly, and the message is beautiful. I need to remember this, thank you.

[HopelessRomantic]

really needed this right now thanks

[Brittany]

This reads like proverbs. I found it light, positive, and encouraging. I liked the flow and message. Well done.

Suggestion: give a dam or damn?

[Bye Guys]

I love this poem its also very inspirational to me to. Great poem hope to see more.