HIT YOUR GOAL

Don't let your dreams fade 

Love can defeat hate 

Time is just a thief 

Steals happiness and leaves you in grief 

Live like you will die tomorrow 

So don't let yourself die in sorrows 

Forget what you have lost and learn to move on 

No one can break you as long as they know you are strong 

Learn from your mistakes 

But don't let them break you 

Just be real and pure 

So that no one can make you insecure 

Don't give a damn what other people say 

Cause you are beautiful in your own way 

Be the star of your own sky 

You are always a winner as long as you try 

Open your heart and free your soul 

And when the time comes hit your goal 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great job with metrica, I guess I can say without problems, that (at least for the people I know) you're the "queen of the couplets in WC", you just write them so naturally and superbly at the same time. The flow is amazing, and it doesn't hurt AT ALL watching you finally write a "good mood type" of poem !! You make such great works when you do it !!

[EileenMarie]

This is great.... goals hold no boundaries with age, I have accomplished so many this year and I am on the back nine so to speak!
Nice write :)

[Saleem Little]

Spoken like a true free spirit and a couragous soul...I like it

[darkness*star1985]

I think we all can say that we can learn a lot of your writing, speaks of truth within each word. Excellent.

[I Shred This Cabbage]

very clear and reasoned statements. well done :)

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Great job ,Afra. The beautiful message of this poem reflects through every word:)

-Cord

[astronaut]

Very inspiring and driving. True, when the time comes, we'll hit our goals. Great job and keep writing. :)

[kublakhan27]

Nice work^^

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very inspirational and full of hope,
sure leaves the reader inspired...great piece of writing :D

[Ama May Cooper]

A nice pleasnt poem. Uplifting and rather inspiring to read. A true goal driver. Very encouraging.