HIT YOUR GOAL

Don't let your dreams fade 

Love can defeat hate 

Time is just a thief 

Steals happiness and leaves you in grief 

Live like you will die tomorrow 

So don't let yourself die in sorrows 

Forget what you have lost and learn to move on 

No one can break you as long as they know you are strong 

Learn from your mistakes 

But don't let them break you 

Just be real and pure 

So that no one can make you insecure 

Don't give a damn what other people say 

Cause you are beautiful in your own way 

Be the star of your own sky 

You are always a winner as long as you try 

Open your heart and free your soul 

And when the time comes hit your goal 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great job with metrica, I guess I can say without problems, that (at least for the people I know) you're the "queen of the couplets in WC", you just write them so naturally and superbly at the same time. The flow is amazing, and it doesn't hurt AT ALL watching you finally write a "good mood type" of poem !! You make such great works when you do it !!

[aleemjassani]

wow I just loved it.. :)

[Cynthia Man]

I love the idea of this poem really much! It's so encouraging and warm hearted! Also, I love how the flow of the poem is! SImply beautiful! We all have goals in life, we might get tripped in the middle, but standing up again is much more important :D Love the poem!

[Ahmad Cox]

Very true. I really appreciated this poem

[Cole Hayley]

Upliffting is the tale you penned here. "be the star of your own sky" great advice for sure. A good write.

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Very good use of ryhme and dam fine work altogather Afra.
Im sorry i havent read your work sooner i was probaly in a dark place or locked up im kidding it was a work realease anyways jokes aside my friend dam good to read you and im very empressed stay crazy and cheers

Gonzo

[andreii93]

Wow! I really like it! Great job :)

[AK]

Great poem! It is very encouraging and has a gripping rhyme to it. Keep writing!

[Sky]

You are an inspiration. Great write!

[Tate Morgan]

Hello Afra We all seem to have goals in life.some realistic some not But it gives us hope for a future

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a triumph....nice encouragment for self and others