HIT YOUR GOAL

Don't let your dreams fade 

Love can defeat hate 

Time is just a thief 

Steals happiness and leaves you in grief 

Live like you will die tomorrow 

So don't let yourself die in sorrows 

Forget what you have lost and learn to move on 

No one can break you as long as they know you are strong 

Learn from your mistakes 

But don't let them break you 

Just be real and pure 

So that no one can make you insecure 

Don't give a damn what other people say 

Cause you are beautiful in your own way 

Be the star of your own sky 

You are always a winner as long as you try 

Open your heart and free your soul 

And when the time comes hit your goal 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great job with metrica, I guess I can say without problems, that (at least for the people I know) you're the "queen of the couplets in WC", you just write them so naturally and superbly at the same time. The flow is amazing, and it doesn't hurt AT ALL watching you finally write a "good mood type" of poem !! You make such great works when you do it !!

[teddy]

i love this ...you are amazing ....u r really talented i wish i could be more like you

[Barbara Walker]

Love this positive poem! Favorite lines-don't give a damn what other people say,
cause you are beautiful, in your own way- It is so freeing to stop worrying about what others think- all that energy can be used for joyful times!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

This one should be publish famously in order to make people not to give up their dreams and live the career they always hoped and are gifted for. Such a nice poem to capture all of that.

[Holly]

Awesome job!!! this tells people to never give up and follow your dreams! great work!!!!

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

this is a message more people need to hear and learn great write but don't forget you can still learn this yourself thanks for sharing your amazing poem i do certainly love your work

[Emrys Realmskip]

Very inspiring! Wonderful moral.. and great flow of the stanzas :)
Over all.. Great work! :)
-----------Savvy

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is once again a short, deep and powerful poem.

I love the 8th stanza:

'Be the star of your own sky
You are always a winner as long as you try.'

WONDERFUL!!!

[Krista Weiss]

Really good :) Loved it!!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

terrific message

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well this is pretty much most of my attitude. I couldn't of said it better myself. Great job