HIT YOUR GOAL

Don't let your dreams fade 

Love can defeat hate 

Time is just a thief 

Steals happiness and leaves you in grief 

Live like you will die tomorrow 

So don't let yourself die in sorrows 

Forget what you have lost and learn to move on 

No one can break you as long as they know you are strong 

Learn from your mistakes 

But don't let them break you 

Just be real and pure 

So that no one can make you insecure 

Don't give a damn what other people say 

Cause you are beautiful in your own way 

Be the star of your own sky 

You are always a winner as long as you try 

Open your heart and free your soul 

And when the time comes hit your goal 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great job with metrica, I guess I can say without problems, that (at least for the people I know) you're the "queen of the couplets in WC", you just write them so naturally and superbly at the same time. The flow is amazing, and it doesn't hurt AT ALL watching you finally write a "good mood type" of poem !! You make such great works when you do it !!

[M.E.Lyle]

Great advice put to rhyme. Sometimes it's difficult to stand up and be yourself. Sounds like you are a person that has confidence in themself.

[Paul Hickson]

beautiful piece! so uplifting a great read to start the day!

[Dr. Wood ?]

be true to yourself, and don't let anyone make you any different. Good advice we could all do with taking

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow so much strength and truth and power in your words.

[Rob Santana]

aawww,man I love this poem!!!!! Blunt and straight forward. You hit your goal with this one Afra,hahaha,great job.

[B-poet]

Very indepth and inspirational. I love your work. :)

[Dark Tower]

Nothing short of brilliant.

[Syed Ali]

I take it that's how you live your life. Keep up the good work. Cant wait to read more of your stuff. All the best :)

[Crimson Bayonet]

Amazing, simply amazing~! I loved it! I am speechless!

[Pól]

Lovely flow, simple lines, great imagery, and most of all, really sound advice. I really like that it doesn't become too sentimental, always a danger when covering this type of theme.