YOU ARE SAFE IN MY HEART

The scars of love won't  let me forget 

There's no end of this pain and regret 

Happiness just vanished from my life 

Dark shadows won't leave 

Your memories won't let me believe 

That you are no longer with me 

I can still feel your presence 

Cause you captured my heart 

You were my light so now i am lost in the dark 

Hopes float in the sea of love 

They say no one  comes back from above 

But i will never let you go 

You are safe in my heart 

Reviews

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is a deep and powerful poem,
with a sense of melancholy ( sadness )

This touched me deeply

WELL DONE!!!

[Btwixer]

such a powerful read, so rhymatic write

[Pax]

This is sad, like never moving on...all in all its good.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Very nice. Reminds me of "seperate ways (worlds apart)" and "open arms" but sometimes its better to let go. Trust me. I know. It may hurt but its for the best sometimes. Great write