YOU ARE SAFE IN MY HEART

The scars of love won't  let me forget 

There's no end of this pain and regret 

Happiness just vanished from my life 

Dark shadows won't leave 

Your memories won't let me believe 

That you are no longer with me 

I can still feel your presence 

Cause you captured my heart 

You were my light so now i am lost in the dark 

Hopes float in the sea of love 

They say no one  comes back from above 

But i will never let you go 

You are safe in my heart 

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"I can still feel your presence
Cause you captured my heart"

"But i will never let you go
You are safe in my heart"

deep lines xx

[....]

love the last stanza so much, so true. Very nicely written. Love this write.

[Marissa]

I love the message in this poem it's so relatable...if that's a word

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very nice message, great flow, rhyme and pathos :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire and the purpose of the poem. I agree with the ending. Some people become part of us forever. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lindsay T]

Really beautiful and really captivating. Keep up the good work, you're on a roll! :)

[Emrys Realmskip]

I love this, its very deep and captivating. :) good work!

[mariah]

very sad, yet sweet at the same time. very emotional too. i can tell you were probably thinking of someone in specific when you wrote this? anyway, i think its very well written. nice work :P
-Mariah

[MOON]

Emotional deep write always safe in the heart.

[Rusty]

Very nice