DREAMS

DREAMS

A Poem by afra

Tears flow from heart
Which has been torn  apart

Blood flows from pain
Which never seem to drain

Love flows from feelings 
Which always seem to be hurting 

Dreams flow from your brain
Which gives you hope to live again

© 2012 afra


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wow this was short but amazing each line pierced me...very true and very NICE

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow powerful in such few words. As everything flows and drain from the the rips and pains in life and the dreams you wish to make of them. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Thumbs up ! The only thing is that the third couplet doesn't rhyme, but it still is good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice poem. Short but deep. Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


expressive and beautiful. thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem expresses the ups and downs, the negative and positive and how we all want to have hope! Good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


One of your better ones.

How about:

"Love flows from feelings
Which is always healing"?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Okay. The third couplet kinda of throws it off a bit. I doesn't rhyme like the rest of them and it interrupts the flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I noticed that the third couplet is the only one that doesn't rhyme, not sure if that was intentional or not.

Other than that, wonderfully bittersweet piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dreams flow from your brain
Which gives you hope to live again --> I like this stanza... really inspires me.. haha GREAT WRITE.. thanks for sharing
- Kuhr gred

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Toronto, Mississauga, Canada



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