DREAMS

Tears flow from heart
Which has been torn  apart

Blood flows from pain
Which never seem to drain

Love flows from feelings 
Which always seem to be hurting 

Dreams flow from your brain
Which gives you hope to live again

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You have a knack for quality over quantity...another potent piece.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Enjoyed. Brief quick words speak volumes. pat

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Sometimes the mind can direct us to a better place. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[L. Edward Neale]

Glad that rung out happy at the end. I was hoping you weren't getting all Emo on us. Good one!

[Sami Khalil]

I love the ending too. Excellent write

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Dreams flow from your brain
Which gives you hope to live again"

magical words!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very well done with the couplets and the kind of "scheme" you've used with them, you've treated the subjects of all 4 couplets as liquids, as the verb "flow" let us guess, the first 2 were really liquids, the last two became so thanks to metaphors, all the subjects are logically linked to a particular element that thanks to a particular reason ended up "releasing" the liquid-subject of the stanza. Pretty tricky but incredible, shows great talent and imagination !

[mariah]

its short but has great rythem. nice job :)
-Mariah

[Pax]

nice reflection of dreams. i like it.

[Ink Angel]

Short and sweet, I like it.