WORDS HURT

some words are so strong that they can break you down

Don't open your mouth

Cause all I hear is s**t 

And those talks straight in my heart they hit

They make me cry

Can't you see that in my eyes

That I break every time

When your tongue crosses the line

They hurt me they make me choke

They run over all my hopes

They make me suffer

It gets hard to breathe

I look alive outside, but I am dead underneath

Pack your tongue and take away your s****y s**t 

Cause the words you say really hurt

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Words do hurt. My wise Grandfather taught me. "Nothing good to say. Say nothing. Negative words and actions will lead you to causing permanent damage." I like the honest feel and the desire of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Baby Ricochet]

very true. great poem

[Honey54]

This is a so real and it flows perfectly!

[Kent Smotherman]

I really liked this honest, raw piece. Great word choices, and I particularly liked the line "When your tongue crosses the line". Very good write!

[Aehr]

oh.. i've been here a couple of times. some words really hurt you sometimes. you portrayed your emotions well here...

[Jazique]

Nice, now a days the saying "sticks and stones will break my bones but words will never heart me," has taken a wrong turn because words do hurt; a lot. They tare us apart, echoing in out minds and you've portrayed the pain and agony it cause any person at any age with a breath of a word from the tongue because whether people realize it or not; words can follow us to out graves and that is a long time to hurt. Anyways well done for out spoken against such a problem.

[chelie]

I love this poem and every word is the truth!

[Marissa]

I love this it has such strong emotion.

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

this has a lot of raw emotion i love it

[luna11]

Words can be powerful, and painful...
Very nice poem :)
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