DREAM

I can be the reason of your smile or tears

I can give you hope or let you die in fears

I can snatch your smile

Or can make you happy, but for a while

Some give up some follow me

But in their minds I'll always be

Somethink I am real, some think  I am fake

Somethink I am a big mistake

The people who believe me with their heart and soul

I can help them achieve their goal

Some people love me, some people hate

But I'll haunt them every night, I'll not fade

I can give you smile or scream

I can be described in a word called dream

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

Ok Afra...This is just absolutely outrageous!!! How dare you take such a simple word and turn it into a symphony, a masterpiece, I feel like I have been beatin to the ground by your words!!!! I am gonna call the police about this type of harsh treatment!!! LoL Seriously though...I just don't get it...How do you make such brilliance like this...You damn Canadiens, why do you have to be better at everything?!?! LoL Afra this is just exactly what I am talking about...When you put your mind seriously to the grindstone look at how razor sharp it becomes!!! Keep this up and I might have to call you consistantly great...Please don't do that to me!!! LoL

[afra]

thank you soooooooooo much

[Olivia Marie]

It was wonderful :) I wouldn't change anything about it :)

[Ama May Cooper]

Some and think are seperate words.
Consider adding me on the end of some people hate.
Poetical. Short. Sweet and to the point.
A poem that dictates ofa great power , a power that seems to be a little devious in intention .. well written lovely.

[Tomi]

I love this, Great write! well done!

[Debbie_Philly]

Ahhhh... yes... love the dreams.... I have some crazy and wonderful ones... and some that come true...lol. Great piece !! :)

[MOON]

Good write , descriptive.

[Destinyxi]

This reminds me of a song by SR-71. It's very nice afra! Keep it up!

[kublakhan27]

Reading this, I feel a lot like a dream now myself :P

[murrill]

This is a great poem it speak to me. Small Erro (Some think)

or Some Imagine , some sence

[Skye]

Even from the Title I wasn't thinking it was going to end like that. I love this, even if only for the topic. Nicely penned. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

A very unique and captivating piece of work. Well done.