DREAM

I can be the reason of your smile or tears

I can give you hope or let you die in fears

I can snatch your smile

Or can make you happy, but for a while

Some give up some follow me

But in their minds I'll always be

Somethink I am real, some think  I am fake

Somethink I am a big mistake

The people who believe me with their heart and soul

I can help them achieve their goal

Some people love me, some people hate

But I'll haunt them every night, I'll not fade

I can give you smile or scream

I can be described in a word called dream

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

Ok Afra...This is just absolutely outrageous!!! How dare you take such a simple word and turn it into a symphony, a masterpiece, I feel like I have been beatin to the ground by your words!!!! I am gonna call the police about this type of harsh treatment!!! LoL Seriously though...I just don't get it...How do you make such brilliance like this...You damn Canadiens, why do you have to be better at everything?!?! LoL Afra this is just exactly what I am talking about...When you put your mind seriously to the grindstone look at how razor sharp it becomes!!! Keep this up and I might have to call you consistantly great...Please don't do that to me!!! LoL

[afra]

thank you soooooooooo much

[The dark story]

what an enthralling piece of writing...........really awesome..each and every line holds a true meaning with it.the personification of the dream is really appreciable.....great work.keep writing like this.>:)

[James McFadyen]

Personification is an emphatic technique, always best revealed at the finale of any piece of writing. well done!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Loved the flow of your words...good write...

[Cole Hayley]

ouuuuuu I like i like. A very dark peice, with a haunting extended metaphor thorughout the whole piece.

[Krista Weiss]

Really nice!!! :)

[Pax]

really nice flow, the rhyming fits perfect. i like it.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

i wonder who or what it is. good work.

[Mockingbird]

sounds like a person obsessed with someone and sounds like a stalker.

[Androglossia]

A good description of dream. And yes, it happens to all. Dreams may be real or imaginary. Maybe helpful or not. But the truth is, dream is how we see it.

Good job!

[Rusty]

Very well done. Excellent work.