LOVE ME NOW INSTEAD

You will realize that my tears were not fake

You will forgive all my mistakes

You will finally see my invisible love

You will realize that I was a gift for you from above

You will say that you loved me

You will sleep every night with a wish to see me in your dream

My thoughts will occupy your head

You will remember all the crazy stuff I have said

You will realize I was a good daughter and a good friend

All when my life will end?

Are you waiting for me lie on my grave bed

Please love me now instead ...

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

Thank you Afra...You are proving yourself to be at one point a shimering glass of sparkly champagine and then at the other end just a plain glass of tap water...This, I am sorry to say, is the latter....The ending is very good but the rest of it kinda reads like an 80s slow hair band song....You have proven to me time and time and time again that you can just blow me away with a masterpiece and then shove something out there that is well for lack of a better word...Plain....And that is not you...You can do better...MUCH better...

[Owlgirl]

Wow. The emotion and pain and darkness that seep from it, this is beautiful. I love it. I'm putting it in my favorites.

[murrill]

I love it. Great job on the changes.

[Dream Weaver]

This sounds like a teen anthem or an ode to
parents just don't understand, at least this is
what I got from it. Lack of communication
equals lack of love.

[Pax]

nice and beautiful. good job.

[ewest1220]

Perfect, just perfect. This one touched a very personal area of my life... Great job thank you so much for sharing!

[Brittany]

This makes me sad because I'm sure a lot of people feel this way about their parents. Good job with evoking emotion. Good stanzas and word choices. Nice job getting across the message.

[teddy]

awesome .... you never know what you have until it gone ....good jo

[Amanda]

Reminds me a lot of my mom. Except I haven't been a good daughter or friend, not really. Only to my dad :/

[Laura Maidah]

I only loooove the last stanza. The rest was just aiight

[T. Logan]

I think this is true for a lot of people. Nobody feels like they're loved all the time. I like this.