LOVE ME NOW INSTEAD

You will realize that my tears were not fake

You will forgive all my mistakes

You will finally see my invisible love

You will realize that I was a gift for you from above

You will say that you loved me

You will sleep every night with a wish to see me in your dream

My thoughts will occupy your head

You will remember all the crazy stuff I have said

You will realize I was a good daughter and a good friend

All when my life will end?

Are you waiting for me lie on my grave bed

Please love me now instead ...

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

Thank you Afra...You are proving yourself to be at one point a shimering glass of sparkly champagine and then at the other end just a plain glass of tap water...This, I am sorry to say, is the latter....The ending is very good but the rest of it kinda reads like an 80s slow hair band song....You have proven to me time and time and time again that you can just blow me away with a masterpiece and then shove something out there that is well for lack of a better word...Plain....And that is not you...You can do better...MUCH better...

[jmmartinez]

kind of remember feeling that before just would not have been able to put it into words like you have. very nice, very emmotinal. I am glad that feeling has past for myself hope you do as well if this is a personal feeling

[That_Girl]

Emotional...well done.

[eeoopig]

You are a very talented writer. I love your poetry. This was full of emotion and was very descriptive. Great work

[Beck Louise]

Full of raw emotion, well done

[Cole Hayley]

Once again you show raw talent here, I love it afra

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A talented piece thatreads well.

[Rusty]

Superb!

[Olivia Marie]

Very nice :) I think if the second stanza was worded differently it would flow better, but otherwise, it was deep and powerful.

[Cosmic kid]

"Are you waiting for me lie on my grave bed
Please love me now instead ..."
Time can be a pain in the a*s but good job very powerful and strong