I HAVE FOUND MY LIFE IN YOU

I will walk behind you

And break all other ties

I will leave the path that

Does not lead to you

I will attach my all dreams

And hope with you

I will break all my other relationships

With a smile for you

I will only maintain a relationship 

Of heart with you

I will give you my everything 

I'll give up my life for you

My life is now attached with yours

I have found my happiness in you

My heart will beat with the beat of your heart 

I have seen my heaven in you 

I will love you forever 

Cause I have found my life in you

Author's Note

I know I am not good at writing love poem ..but still tell what you think

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

This poem has a gentle, friendly feel. It speaks of commitment and attachment bringing joy and friendship. I like the way you repeat the expression 'in you' throughout the poem, focusing the reader's attention on the recipient. Hopefully, the offer will be reciprocated.

[Shay]

Aww so beautiful!

[Androglossia]

Well, love doesn't come up wrapped in a pink box, ready-made from heaven. Love works for all those who work at it. It is about trying to be open-minded and understand that we give love not to gain favor but it is something we share to someone special because giving it makes us happy.

Your poem speaks of boundless courage. It speaks of determination and the joy of doing it.

Impressive work!

[Barbara Walker]

5th line, I think you meant to write, "I will attach all my dreams...". It's a very nice poem but when I read something like this, my first thought is, don't lose yourself!

So beautiful Afra, to connect with some who really matters...
This is an exquisite write. I enjoyed it a lot.
At least you're so honest, and adore that as a Dutch in people.
Not everyone can be~ or dares~

E.L.

[Skye]

Amazing! Nothing else to say.

[HopelessRomantic]

wow that's very heartfelt and emotional I love it

[Pax]

beautiful...

[Peaceworker22]

I see no errors, that is good. It almost sounded like a Christian poem to me until I read it was about love. I agree with pencrafter on this one. Good work!

[ewest1220]

Not so good!? I said that once and the poem I wrote for my girlfriend made her cry lol I loved this. It's very gentle and loving. A whole lot of compassion packed into a relatively short poem. Thank you so much for letting me read this!

[Serenity Faith]

For one who thinks you're not good at writing love poems, this was absolutely lovely. It expressed your devotion to your love. No one could have done it any better ^_^ Beautiful Afra.