BAD DREAM

I know its not that good ...just random stuff that come in my mind

Tears started falling from my eyes like rain

Pain started running through my every vein

As soon as the police officer told me about your death

I keep asking the officer to tell me that its not true

That my husband has died

But his reply broke my heart into two

My world was fallen apart

As soon as I realized that you are no longer with me

Never knew our love story would have this part

If I knew this was our last goodbye

I would never let you go

Why did you leave me alone , please tell me why?

Just then I woke up

And  you were  sleeping next to me

And I realized that it was just a bad dream

Reviews

[Androglossia]

Nice twist. You really know how to drag the minds of the audience away from anticipating the possible ending. Good work!

I spotted minor errors:

Pain started running through my every vain(vein- unless you meant somethin else..)
As soon as the police officer(told) me about your death
As soon as I realize(realized) that you are no longer with me

[afra]

thank you

[Secret Lullaby]

This was great!

[afra]

thank you