BAD DREAM

I know its not that good ...just random stuff that come in my mind

Tears started falling from my eyes like rain

Pain started running through my every vein

As soon as the police officer told me about your death

I keep asking the officer to tell me that its not true

That my husband has died

But his reply broke my heart into two

My world was fallen apart

As soon as I realized that you are no longer with me

Never knew our love story would have this part

If I knew this was our last goodbye

I would never let you go

Why did you leave me alone , please tell me why?

Just then I woke up

And  you were  sleeping next to me

And I realized that it was just a bad dream

Reviews

[Winter]

A really good poem

[afra]

thank you

[Krista Weiss]

Wow! I love this :)

[afra]

thanks

[darkness*star1985]

I have had this kind of dream myself, or even dreams of my own death, they leaving you scared even when you wake up.... good poem i like how this is writen out.. brillent write... pleasure alway to read your work

[afra]

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[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

WoW even if it was just random stuff it was great and i could feel all the emotion in the poem perfectly and it was great! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[afra]

thank you

[T. Logan]

Im relieved that it was a dream. Sadly death happens a lot. Good imagery!

[afra]

thank you

[Olivia Marie]

It was great :) I find that at the second stanza, I had to reread it do to the change in rhythm. However I loved the ending, and it was all put together quite nicely. :)

[afra]

thank you

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I am so glad it was just a bad dream, my heart stopped because of my past experience as I read this. Thank God, it was just a dream. A wonderful piece.

[afra]

awww i am sorry to hear that ....thanks you

[harry]

wow ...you love adding a twist in the ending dont you ...lol ...but i still love it ....good job

[afra]

thank you

[That_Girl]

Haha yay! Happy ending!! Nicely done.

[afra]

thank you

[Amanda]

I like this poem better than the one with the dead wife. I wish this was a story and the husband had comforted his wife. Nicely done!

[afra]

thank you ..well i am not good at writing stories