DEAD

I know this is a bit confusing but still tell me what you think

I am your wife

I am the person you called your life

But why are you ignoring me?

You are not that person who you used to be

You never listen to what I say

You just turn your back on me and walk away

Why are you ignoring my tears?

Now you don't even notice me living here

We are like two strangers living in a same home

I am living with the person I love, but I still feel alone

Every night I can hear you cry

Why aren't you talking to me?, please tell me why

You stare at my picture and cry

I have forgiven you, that's not a lie

But all my complaints were gone after what your friend said

"I am sorry to hear that your wife is dead "

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

Now this is what I knew you were capable of Afra!!! You knocked this out of the park...Your ending to this poem would make M Nyte Shamalan (Mispelled probably) jealous!!!! From start to end you made this good, better, GREAT!!! I have read your efforts before and you have made good poems without even trying it seems...Now this is what happens when you let your talents off the leash, they go MAD!!! and make this....Close to perfection!!!

[afra]

aawwwwwww thank you sooo much ...=)

[Shay]

Very good

[....]

deep and very emotional, well expressed

[Carrie]

Beautiful and sad all at the same time! Great work!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Not confusing, just very surprising! Good job.

[n8adamczak]

That caught me off gaurd at the end, love your poems

[Reform69]

Your like a ghost not necessarily haunting but there watching your husband? I like it =)

[murrill]

I could relate with this poem me and my wife are just about split up so this really got me thinking but we still are separating under different circumstances.

[afra]

aawww i am sorry to hear that ...

[Pencrafter]

At the time I'm reading this poem you already have 299 views and 48 reviews. I am not a professional writer and I have no educational degrees. Your poem has great imagery and depth of feeling. It's well-written and has potent feeling. I want to be like you when I grow up.

[afra]

aww thanks

[Dez H.]

Damn okay, I got the full effect when i got to the end. I like this because i thought it was just differences between the two then i realized what was what. Good s**t.

[afra]

thank you