What If...

What If...

A Poem by afifa malik
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Eternal tragedy of Man!

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 What if...
The road never ends,
Or 'tis no more than a single step.

What if...
The captured fluttering poor soul,
escapes the iron bars,
Or she is destined to groan,
wearing this terrestrial crown.

What if...
This blazing golden chariot,
Strings its celestial beams back,
Or go on kissing the dusty face,
Keeping its eternal grace.

What if...
We are but in a dream,
A situation captivating our senses,
And some day,
Death wakes us up.

What if...
We see all our triumphs n failures,
Are nothing but a virtual reflection,
A motion picture!
Played on the screen of our minds
and
The Show is ended...

© 2012 afifa malik


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this is a great poem... it does provoke thought and introspection... well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

afifa malik

12 Years Ago

thanx! :-)
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Pax
beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem about life's great questions. Your third stanza doesn't make sense, but I could just be reading it wrong. Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

afifa malik

12 Years Ago

thanx! about third stanza:
This blazing golden chariot is thought to be sun
n dusty face.. read more
Kenaz

12 Years Ago

I got that it was the beams that confused me, because I was tired and thinking too literally as in w.. read more
afifa malik

12 Years Ago

:-)
The what if's? Leave in wonder what could of happen and what we did. I like the strong statements leading the reader to the question all of us had asked. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

afifa malik

12 Years Ago

thanks for appreciating. :-)

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afifa malik
afifa malik

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