LAMP

Pale Golden light through the white shades,

Concealing and revealing,

Contouring the features.

Shadows on the wall,

Deceiving shapes,obscure!

Alluring thoughts!

As some red eyed witch,

Has twisted its murky black gown,

And everything is under a spell,

A silent castle!

Stagnant!

Just the shadows,

Flickering on the walls...

Ruling!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong description gave life to your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Saba Sharif]

Marvelous Bajooo.... It's amzingly rich in imagery. Highly sensitive contrasts of light n dark images, revealing n concealing, contoures, stillness n yet life n movement all through the flow. Job well done. loved it. :P

[afifa malik]

saba u know how much i value ur words! its really a big applause for me!!!
thanx!!! ^.^

[Saba Sharif]

[Saba Sharif]

love*

[Butters]

you took something as ordinary as a lamp and made it into something much more. Good job!

[afifa malik]

thanks :-)