If I Was Your Vampire

For V.G.

To bite into virgin flesh
And replenish my sinful soul
Would be the ultimate meal
Of carnage…
         Drip, drip, unto these lips
Reddened from sucking
The flesh till its pale.
I would speak of flattery
And reel you into the darkness
Of a blood red dungeon
Where all day it is night.
No moonshine… no light
Lay down on this bed
With silk sheets
That wrap you into a web
Of passion…and death.
Tomorrow you’ll  be alive
But one of the walking dead,
And after dark I will seduce you
And lure you in
With voodoo powers,
Inexplicable but real…
Mysterious being ---
A vampire by night,
Asleep by day.
Imprinting these fangs
Into your skin
Your neck and breasts
As soft as new born flesh.
Kiss these bloody lips
And you’ll become mine..
Drip, drip, unto this tongue
And let me taste
The last drop of you.
Let me taste,
Let me bite,
Let  me suck,
Let me  eat you alive.
No reluctance…
Just submit.

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow, this is by far one of my favorite vampire poems I have ever in my life read... This was erotic and so descriptive. My only problem was with the no moonlight... something about the moonlight would make it so much more of a sexy scene lol. This was beautifully done, the scene you created was so descriptive and so vivid i wish i was there taking part in it. I'm in love with this piece. One of the Best I have ever ever read (sorry, keep repeating things) I loved the use of drip drop in this piece.

"Let me taste,
Let me bite,
Let me suck,
Let me eat you alive.
No reluctance�
Just submit."