Sank, Saved

Author's Note

Most days I like to sum up a personal experience in just a few lines. It's a sublime feeling, having metaphors others can relate to, but in them hides a story, a secret that only I know.

Reviews

[ThatDude]

It leaves a lot to the imagination, but I enjoyed reading this. Nice poem.

[WILDERNESS]

happy flying................ nice one
keep your secrets but share your poems

[Einstein Noodle]

well...our secrets be what they may right?! i see a young lady swept to sea and drown ..but God has reached out and she is freed from earthly cares and sickness..as she in turn takes that hand ;) that's what i see ... but i am kind of bent that way anyway ..could be she is in the arms of her love and wakes from a bad dream ;) either way your Sank and Saved creates a very definite moment for me and wider story that i may fill as i please .. i like the elegance of the cursive writing ... few words, plain language, big scene :)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we have the secrets and we really don't need others to know what inspired our poems...we have reasons but we hope readers can relate in some way...all that matters....
we taste the salt and get those waves in our lungs...those who read get to see the seas we want them to.