Chapter II - Queen's Rule

She declared her identity

And off she marched to the empty throne

Amidst curious and frightened spectators.

 

They have no memory of her;

Misery and evil had robbed her of beauty.

 

Only the one with Blood could occupy the throne

And she was accommodated

And she was now Queen.

 

Yet she was more feared than revered.

And Celestial Creatures conceived an emotion

That was strange in their nature.

 

They detested her

‘cause she bore no resemblance of King

Who was the best ruler Homeland ever had.

 

She imposed rules of varied wickedness,

Reflections of her diabolical ideals.

 

She drained them of their Nature,

And baptized them Cursed Creatures.

 

Those who contradicted her government

Were subjects of Punishment mirroring their greatest Fear.

 

In silence the Cursed Creatures endured her tyranny

But they held on to the faith of sages

Who openly objected to Queen’s evil laws

And suffered Punishment.

 

They foretold a tale which originated from Friend,

King’s most trusted companion.

 

It’s about King’s frequent visits to Third Planet.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

This also has the feel for a mythological tale, it reminds me somewhat of some of the Celtic myths, due to the tie in of the King's presence bringing prosperity and peace to the land. Very well done, Blue, it is amazing how many different forms of literature you so easily master.