The Last Page

"the end"

So, that was it...

The last page of our tale

where characters drifted apart

and reasons were embalmed between the lines.

 

Postponing authored tragic end,

I reflected on our bookmarked chapters

and married our midnight memories.

 

Death dwelled in delays

so with a sigh, I chose to let go

and let things be --

conflict unresolved,

plot unjustified.

 

I composed courage

and faced the last page

of my best eight months,

 

 

 

 

 

epilogued by an ellipsis.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I composed courage
and faced the last page
of my best eight months,





epilogued by an ellipsis.

Wonderful read and flow. Loved the witty closer.

[Kasey Miriam]

Sad, Beautiful, and so well done. Very powerful poem. wonderful write

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Kasey!

[Kasey Miriam]

You are very welcome!

[Budding Jenny]

So sad. What a great write though.

[Blue]

Thank you, Jenny!

[Blue]

I find it beautiful, you compare a relationship to the wholeness of a book, with all details in it... once or twice I did the same, for a book, is almost a whole relationship, with all the written words, and pages, as days, to live.... wonderful poetry here Arzel! :)

- Elisa

[Blue]

Thank you so much again, Elisa. I like your avatar, anyway. So lovely and sophisticated.

Awww thank you so much, and you are welcome anytime, (when I have a bit of time lol)... I like yours too! love your beautiful braids :D -x- :)

[bitz]

Can u mind revwin my poem dat girl in purple

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Dust it off...and carry on...
there are moments in life...
we error and forgive...
move on...because that's the divine...
thing to do...write it down...
it last longer...yet the issue is closed...
and another will open...

[Blue]

Thank you for your insights as always, Glen. :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

came back to this one...damn it's good...

really good.

[Blue]

An honor to hear that from an excellent poet himself. Thank you, Jacob.

[MAC]

how sad yet how wonderful for that person that perhaps shall fit into your heart perfectly. an excellent write.

[Blue]

Thank you for your words, Mark.

[Coyote Poetry]

'I composed courage
and faced the last page
of my best eight months,'
Endings are never easy. Hard when we learn. We have no-where to go except goodbye. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Blue]

Thank you so much, John.

[stars are far]

that was very great ..
"I composed courage
and faced the last page
of my best eight months,"

i did.. hehe..its all better now, so the book is over and the end was the death of one :)
well done

[Blue]

Aww. Suhad... Thanks. Here's me still hoping for better days ahead of you.

[stars are far]

Thank you very much dear Arzel .. I, very well now.. and i hope you the best too