Allow Me

to love you

Allow me

to unveil your carefully groomed facade

and see

. . .really see

who you are,

in the nakedness of your soul,

unadulterated,

free.

Allow me

to eavesdrop on your innermost thoughts

and hear

. . .really hear

your secret soliloquies

of childlike wonders,

uncensored,

pure truth.

Allow me

to touch you where it truly matters

and feel

. . .really feel

the core of your being,

the strength of your softness

--your heart,

bared for me to melt in.

I will take care of you.

If you allow me. . .

Author's Note

Surrender.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Wow yourself! For me personally, this piece reads like a dream and flows like a river of wishes and prayers straight from the soul...speaks of the simple purity rarely seen, the effort rarely given to love.

Thanks for sharing!

[Blue]

Thank you more for this review, Antonyo.

[Ruth]

How gorgeous!! Listening, really listening to the inner core, the soul, soul hearing, that's what love is, indeed, this is magnificent! x

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Poppy!

[Eric Pudalov]

Ooh!! Wow, Arzel! This is not only wonderfully expressed (and with a good message, I believe). It almost seems as though you read my mind, because I was writing something very similar before I even read this. I wonder how many lovers have thoughts like these; quite a few, I imagine!

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Eric! I appreciate your reviews! Let me know if you have written a somewhat similar poem as this. :)

[topsyturvy]

I love your play of words, they intrigue and capture your readers :)

[Blue]

Wow. I'm honored. Thank you so much!

[Inda]

A passionate revealing write, love it!

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Inda!

[ron]

I could surrender to words so beautiful.

[Blue]

You made me blush. Thank you, Ron.

[ron]

Most of the time I'm the one blushing...lol.

[Blue]

Why, Ron? I'm curious. :)

[Sami Khalil]

One of your best. Different and stunning in beauty....Bravo.................

[Blue]

I'm not comfortable with this one but I'm pleased that you think of this as my best. Thank you so much, Sami. It's always an honor to hear from you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[AYVID N]

Powerful words...total surrender...take that leap of faith. Stunning!

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Divya!

[Hannan Helal]

good writing. like to read more. pls, keep it up.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Hannan. I will.

[Hannan Helal]

well done.....................