Work. Wonder. Write!

Work. Wonder. Write!

A Poem by Blue
"

Experience. Examine. Express.

"
Wrestle with wooing worries and wars.
Wage wealth of wombed wishes and whys.
Work.


Wallow in writer's wanton wanderlust.
Worship worthy wounds of wayward weights.
Wonder.


Warrant a wardrobe of weathered words.
Wed to wisdom's weapons.
Write!

© 2014 Blue


Author's Note

Blue
I thought of playing with alliteration but it seems that I ended up writing a tongue twister with some depth. Well, I hope this makes sense somehow.

Smile :)

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Lovely write. Greatly enjoyed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Praveeta! I enjoy your reviews, too.
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
You always amaze me. I imagine your work will be included when sometime in the future they talk about english literature in class.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

The lesson will be "The Worst Poems Ever". Hahaha. :P
Donald

10 Years Ago

Don't be so hard on yourself. Your poem says a lot with so little being ssid.
Blue

10 Years Ago

Of course I'm joking, Donald. :) Thank you for boosting my ego. ;)
What a wonderful write!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, BR.
Great alliteration. Flows well!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Elliot.
Wow! It is deep indeed.
I liked it!
:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
you may have started out with an exercise but you ended with (in my opinion) a very successful poem .. the form was immediately pleasing to me ... its simplicity striking ... the "tongue twists" i find to be powerful in that it slowed this reader down to pay attention ... i like this a lot Arzel ..nice work
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Your words are always a source of encouragement to me, Einstein. Thank you so much!
Wooo Wow....what? Ha, wonderful! ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Frieda P

10 Years Ago

It most certainly Wwwas...;-)
Blue

10 Years Ago

Gooood. :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Wacky wandering walking wakeful ;-)
Nicely done Arzel...I couldn't do this in a million years.....dana

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Of course you can. Haha. Thank you so much!

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