I Don't Know Erotica

So...can you teach me?

My lover...

I am a poet.

But I don't know erotica.

Will you please...

undress my ignorance

and write me an experience?

I am like a delicate paper,

consumed with the desire to be felt--

Just promise you'll be gentle?

Explore my exposed flesh with poetic touches

and discover a potential universe.

Wrap me inside the wonder of your words...

Until we explode--

in prose and poetry.

Yes...

Lose me in the pages of your passion...

Again and again.

Author's Note

*Blush* I'm not comfortable with free verse. And erotica.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this ; my definition ; erotica takes place in the head and is what you don`t see, or read...

[Blue]

Wise words, Leslie. Thank you so much.

[Beccy]

The more simple and tender the 'write,' the more satisfying it is. The link is perfectly scribed.

Beccy.

[Blue]

Wow, thank you for your lovely words, Beccy.

[Praveeta]

Beautifully sculptured piece Arzel.

[Blue]

Thank you, Praveeta.

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Inda]

Woo! You know poetry i can tell you that, fantastic stuff!

[Blue]

Thank you, Inda.

[Shirlena]

It's very nice. I'm not that great with erotica either but this is very well written with just the right touch of alliteration. Impressive.

[Blue]

I find alliteration interesting. Thank you, Shirlena.

[Simon Welsh]

Beautiful. You wrote this well.

[Blue]

Thank you, Elliott.

[Coyote Poetry]

Few can write erotic with skill. The best writer of erotic touches passion and open door to thoughts without describing every detail. A wise writer allowed the reader to use their imagination and thoughts. I enjoyed the poem. I truly believe a person who desire to write erotic tale. Need to read the good writer of such. I like the free flow of your thoughts in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Blue]

Thank you, Coyote. For someone inexperience, erotica is a challenge. But who needs experience when imagination suffices? Haha. I always love to hear from you.

[WILDERNESS]

Most beautiful poem.............. Arzel that was a gem .................. loved it.............keep going.

[Blue]

Hey, Wilderness. Thank you.

[Calibaster]

This is really good! (as usual) How do you do it?! :) ;) Honestly, I have written tons of poems, but not one is as good as yours! :) Great job! You really put that feeling through! (My personal favorite is the end.) :) ;)

[Blue]

How do I do what? Erotica? Haha. I'm personally inexperienced but imagination suffices so let it take control. ;) Thank you so much for your kind words, Alverrann.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Yes, this is clever and amazing on your subject!
I love free verse and it mostly what I write.
Nice work!

[Blue]

Thank you, Josie! Are you sending RRs?

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I ALWAYS WANT TO LOSE MYSELF IN PROSE AND POETRY! U R WELCOME!