I Don't Know Erotica

I Don't Know Erotica

A Poem by Blue
"

So...can you teach me?

"
My lover...
I am a poet.
But I don't know erotica.

Will you please...


undress my ignorance
and write me an experience?



I am like a delicate paper,
consumed with the desire to be felt--


Just promise you'll be gentle?



Explore my exposed flesh with poetic touches
and discover a potential universe.



Wrap me inside the wonder of your words...
Until we explode--

in prose and poetry.


Yes...


Lose me in the pages of your passion...

Again and again.

© 2014 Blue


Author's Note

Blue
*Blush* I'm not comfortable with free verse. And erotica.

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Ah thew longings of youth.The first of anything is always the one remembered .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Yes, Tate. Thank you so much.
hey this is just awesome..each line...!! Its not erotica...but its is..
Wait! May be not..
Consumed with a desire to be felt!!!! Wow!!


Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Haha. Thank you, Sandeep.
undress my ignorance
and write me an experience?

Yes...
Lose me in the pages of your passion...
Again and again.

I like this one. It's erotic, yet soothing and nice. Great work :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sha...
This is very soothing...in fact I do not want to call it an erotica...whatever has come out at the end of the effort is quite nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Chand...
Erotica is not my forte, either. There is a sweet and gentle tone to this, which is exactly how it should be... ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Rita.
I don't do much with free verse or erotica either. I leave that to Robbie or Ms Jewel. They're good at erotica. I'll stick to being a wise guy. Good Poem Kid

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Yeah, stick to being that. :P Thank you, BR.
I glad you are not comfortable with erotica. I find it to be soft porn. Some things are meant to be between a man and his and nowhere else no matter what others may say. I myself have pushed the envelope once or twice and I also felt uncomfortable about it. I find it sad when others accept sexual experiences out of marriage as love or romance. We have divinity within us and only good acts will nurture that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Wise words from a wise man. I'll keep that in mind. Thank you, Mike.
This is beyond erotica...is full of passion and a bit of a tease :) Well done.. I love it..xoxo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Lily. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Really great poem. You did very well :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Anna.
annabellee

10 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
Despite your otherwise claims I find it deep beautiful piece of erotica.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Avinash. Maybe my judgment is wrong. Haha.

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