I Don't Know Erotica

I Don't Know Erotica

A Poem by Blue
"

So...can you teach me?

"
My lover...
I am a poet.
But I don't know erotica.

Will you please...


undress my ignorance
and write me an experience?



I am like a delicate paper,
consumed with the desire to be felt--


Just promise you'll be gentle?



Explore my exposed flesh with poetic touches
and discover a potential universe.



Wrap me inside the wonder of your words...
Until we explode--

in prose and poetry.


Yes...


Lose me in the pages of your passion...

Again and again.

© 2014 Blue


Author's Note

Blue
*Blush* I'm not comfortable with free verse. And erotica.

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This was beautiful, I felt. Simply because it was so intimate, in a writers way. The way you explain the desire to be touched and related it to a piece of paper. 'Lose me in the pages of your passion, again and again'. Such perfect flow and thought.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You should write free-verse all the time, it's much more fluid. You did an amazing job on this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Too bad! I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great poem.. don't know why you're not so comfortable with something you're obviously a natural at! Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


You did a great job for not being comfortable for it. So way to go on free verse.

Posted 10 Years Ago


his is cute in a romantic kind of way I like it wonderful work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nia Hope

10 Years Ago

*This not his
wow nice poem
i like how you presented the idea behind the poem.
Thank you once again

Posted 10 Years Ago


beautiful and well penned...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your words are sweet and sexy in it's simplicity.
The innocent type of sexy at that...
Lovely write.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

I like the innocent sexiness. It's more charming and sensual. ;) Thanks a lot for dropping by my pro.. read more
Angel Criner

10 Years Ago

Lol cute, anytime.
I think you did just fine.

If it has anything to do with erotica you might want to mark it as mature.

Youngsters and advertisers dont get it.

Enjoyed the blush.
Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago



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