Making Love

hmmm...

moonlit sky

midnight air

bed to lie

love's affair

silk and lace

scented skin

temptress' grace

patience, thin

fiery lips

playful touch

fingertips

teasing much

welcomed arms

thrilling care

dreamy charms

tender stare

wordless naughts

heated thighs

stormy thoughts

blushing sighs

breathless pace

bliss, divine

sensual chase

yours and mine

Author's Note

I'm just having fun with the structure--3 syllables per line with abab rhyme scheme. No definite rule as to the organization of thoughts.

Reviews

[ron]

Wonderfully written. Sensual.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Ron. I'm thrilled to know you frequent my profile lately.

[ron]

It is my pleasure.

[Frieda P]

I like it, especially the second stanza, interesting structure, it dictates the flow of the read, like a sensual chase. Nicely pen'd my friend.

[Blue]

Thank you, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Arzel, I appreciate that you're fearless in your approach to poetry, well done my friend!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love this piece hun its brilliant.
I love the pattern you have going on it looks awesome.
Once again i love your rhyming scheme.
Its filled with passion and heat, emotion and romance.
Very beautiful read :)

[Blue]

Thank you, Cimmy. Your reviews are always a delight to read.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome hun :))