Happy valentines, my lover! (Acrostic)

Happy valentines, my lover! (Acrostic)

A Poem by Blue
"

Are we in love?

"



Have I ever dropped by in your consciousness,

Allowing me superior reign over your rationality?

Parallel to your habitual visits in my waking and sleeping hours,

Potent in dose, advertising romantic insanity?

Yearning for reason, I summoned my muses.

Villains of truth, they bewitched my brain to extremes

And morphed my definition of love to superficial,

Lacking comprehension both in facts and in dreams.

Ever-cunning Cupid struck the arrow of confusion,

Not at all empathetic to my heart's helpless state.

To intuition I submit my contemporary nonsense;

I am at loss between the abyss of love and hate.

Never wise to know what poets write about,

Elaborated by fools, this mystery of unknown origin,

Shall I consider these collective symptoms "love",

Mutually shared and maddeningly believed in?

You professed in solemn countenance, pure

Love to me, never-changing, always present.

Overcoming defiance, I was converted to your claim,

Verified in genuine actions, hyperbole nonexistent.

Eternally-bound by fate's chances and conscious choices,

Reassured we are...in harmony with our hearts' voices.

© 2014 Blue


Author's Note

Blue
My first acrostic.

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This is very good hun, I can imagine how hard it would be to do one of these, but you have done it perfectly :)
Very romantic and beautiful :)
Another great write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Cimmy...
cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Years Ago

your welcome :)
Wow, your first Acrostic and you did a bang up job with this one Arzel, love 'contemporary nonsense', so that's what they're calling it these days ha ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Haha. Thank you, Frieda.
"the arrow of confusion,
Not at all empathetic to my heart's helpless state."

A very romantic and somehow a little sad in some places acrostic. Well written with your great flare...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami. You always cheer me up with your words.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)..................
Very well constructed, quite professional in form.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Eddie!

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