Infidelity: Part I- A Wife's Fury

Infidelity: Part I- A Wife's Fury

A Poem by Blue
"

to the mistress

"
You are a lovely woman
with face inviting envy.
You have curvaceous figure
and lips that taste like honey.
It's no surprise, my sweetheart,
he's under such a spell.
I just dropped by to say hello
and hope that all is well.


He must have had forgotten
to mention me to you.
But see, he's fond of secrets.
(I trust you know that, too!)
He never even told me
you're all he's thinking about.
And yes, I was so shocked, my dear,
when I did figure out.


He was never himself these days,
coming home at dawn.
Whenever I took off my clothes
he's not at all turned on.
And so, one night, I watched him sleep
and knew he's not the same.
He moaned aloud his words of love;
It's no longer my name.


We used to be the perfect pair
until you came along.
So don't you dare give me that look
as if you've done no wrong.
Let's stop this act because I know
you well-devised the games.
If you keep playing, soon you'll see
the danger of your flames.


Oh, gorgeous girl, heed my advice:
Run while you still can.
Nothing spells more trouble than
stealing another's man.
And one more thing, remember this
if you cherish your life:
The next time that you fall in love,
he shouldn't have a wife.

© 2014 Blue


Author's Note

Blue
Google is having its issues right now. I can't find a good picture.

Thank you for reading!

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O! I so much appreciated your poem. The content is good enough for moral lesson, especially those that are not content with what they have, going around seeking for what does not belong to them. Well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is lovely, truthful, and also a common problem in today's society. I feel that it captured life and this generation in it's true light. Not only that but it did it in such a way that it kept me reading.

Posted 10 Years Ago


loved that she put up a fight, very intense

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Leeci.
You gave wise advice in the poem. Steal a man or woman from another. Mean the person was looking for more. I enjoyed the one on one conversation. Even shared some advice. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed, Coyote.
Dang, that is so true! :) Very well put! ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Alverrann.
Calibaster

10 Years Ago

You're welcome!
You are an amazing poet, and I do believe that if you were to choose to go into a writing career than you will do an amazing job. You have such a skill, and I hope that you will keep it up. I enjoy writing your work and I will be looking forward to reading more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, BlackHeart. You are such an inspiration.
neatly crafted and you have a beautiful poet in you, good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you a lot, Amos. Same goes to you as well.
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome my dear and thank you:)
This is so awesome. A really truthful and spiteful piece. Bravo.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, KLGoode.
Well crafted poem. It kept me interested all the way through. I think I wanted to see a cat fight!! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Hahahahaha. You are attracted to violence?! :P
Mark

10 Years Ago

No just two women tearing each other's clothes lol
Blue

10 Years Ago

Oooohhh. :P
I love this piece, very beautiful. The rhyming is perfect and the story keeps the reader involved. I love the advice at the very end, haha, it made me laugh a lot!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Amantle! Sorry I haven't kept in touch for a while.
Amantle Moeng

10 Years Ago

Its ok, we get busy dear, its normal.

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