Murder My Innocence

Drop my halo.

Undress me of my feathered wings.

Silence my conscience with the promise of the night.

 

Flame the passion with the heat of our nakedness.

Dismiss inhibitions and insecurities.

And throw away our cares to the regrets of the dawn.

 

As we play beneath the satin sheets,

unleash the woman in me.

Wild and primal.

 

Send me blushing with the thrill of your touch.

Let our tongues dance to the music of our breathing.

Excite me. Tease me.

 

Leave me gasping for air and for more.

Overwhelm my being with the chorus of my name.

And let's welcome the climax with ecstatic chants.

 

 

 

 

Murder my innocence tonight.

And let's punctuate its death with sighs of satisfaction.

Author's Note

Original link: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/arzeljoy_blu/1250523/

Reviews

[livetowrite]

Wow I really wasn't expecting a poem about love making. Very beautiful and exotic piece well done x

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Emma!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOW WOW WOW, that is sublimely sexy. There are so many creatively sensual verses in here to make my imagination run wild in the street. WOW WOW WOW>

[Blue]

Thank you, Dale! Sorry I almost missed commenting on this. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome… oh no problem, its cool.

[Rogie-Dodge]

brilliantly erotic and passionate.

[Blue]

Thank you, Rogie!

[ron]

Loss of virginity. This how it should feel. Great poem.

[Trace]

Edcellent sensual erotic poetry.

May need mature label

That's probably why I like it.
Trace

[David Scott]

This is not murder. You pen rebirth... I love the subtleness of the words with the obvious intention of the write. My favorite type of erotic poetry.

[MsJewel]

Soft and sensual. I love this passionate little gem! Gorgeous poetry my friend.

:) Julie

[MAC]

the extremes make this an amazing and powerful read. nicely done.

[icelandicblue]

This is so beautifully penned. I love the imagery especially the removal of each angelic symbol. The final lines are quite memorable:

Murder my innocence tonight.
And let's punctuate its death with sighs of satisfaction.