well written, i hope all women could read this it really does make you think about a lot of decisions you make and it is a powerful poem too. i definitely loved this one, well done.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I can't thank you enough for all your kind reviews, Cycy.
Well done; there should be a male version of this poem chastising men for treating women like this. The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak. Self-control is something unheard of anymore, and we wonder why there are so many crimes against women, diseases and sexual perversions.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Can you write the male version of this poem, Eddie? I don't know how a male's mind works, it's still.. read moreCan you write the male version of this poem, Eddie? I don't know how a male's mind works, it's still a mystery to me.
I know that's real Arzel...I agree but you know there are so many who would argue that this is an old fashioned view of how women should carry themselves. Unfortunately, those who feel that way don't know it but usually have a poor self image. I think you can be sexy, fun and vibrant without putting all of your assets on display. Less is always more. Fantabulous writing.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I see your point and thank you for letting me know your thoughts. Ahh, I'm somewhat old-fashioned. :.. read moreI see your point and thank you for letting me know your thoughts. Ahh, I'm somewhat old-fashioned. :)
A woman should be filled with respect both for herself and also others, but the world today, women degrade themselves and show their bodies as they choose to. How sad that is, I hope that kind of a woman is reading this poem right now and let her take caution and gain wisdom. Well done Arze.
Hi, there! I don't know who I really am but let's start with my name. I am Arzel Joy, otherwise known as Blue here in WC.
I have more pressing matters at hand so I have reduced my time spent on th.. more..