Oh, woman!

to all women concerned

Glorious descendant of Eve.

Creature shaped after Adam.

Blessed with beauty.

Blessed with heart.

What insult!

What woe to self you inflict!

Degrading.

Detestable.

Inhuman.

Sacred flesh

you now cheaply expose,

feasted upon

by eyes void of chastity.

Unlawful acts

you shamelessly conduct

to satiate

carnal pleasures

to gain

fleeting approval of men.

Take caution.

Gain wisdom.

Redeem your honor!

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

So many women do sell themselves short. The other side of that coin is that in such difficult economic times many believe that their sexuality is the only currency that they carry. It's all really quite sad. Of course it does take two to tango.

[Blue]

Thank you, Ice!

[Leslie Philibert]

Good write that is open ( I feel) to interpretation !

[Blue]

I agree. Thank you, Leslie!

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

I liked those lines...
Its true that people carve for carnal pleasures but i think love isnt a carnal pleasure.
Beauty should not be exposed..but the inner beauty cannot be exposed. And true wisdom comes when we can see the inner beauty of other human!!
Good work as usual!!!

[Blue]

Thank you, Sandeep!

[Avinash]

You got it right Arzel.. Beauty is not be wasted but should culminate into something more divine.

[Blue]

Thank you, Avinash!

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ... things can easily get out of hand when passions are unleashed ... all in need of correction aren't we?!
E.

[Blue]

Thank you, Einstein! I love the new avatar, anyway.

[Einstein Noodle]

anyway?? :)))
its a pic when we visited Joshua Tree National park ... wish I could get the whole pic in ..its actually of me climbing on Mother Nature ... maybe I can figure out a way to do it ...

[Blue]

Cool. You're into dangerous stuffs? :P

[stars are far]

This is really well done :)
great work

[Blue]

Thank you so much!

[stars are far]

My pleasure dear :)

[Frieda P]

Ahh is this the same sweet girl that wants to be taught erotica? ;-) Lovin' the many splendor'd facets of Arzel!

[Blue]

Hahahahahaha. You made me laugh really hard, Frieda. :P Seems that you are not the only one who's crazy. Thank you. :P

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd to oblige you in a wee giggle my pazzo friend, you gotta laugh at all of life's idiosyncrasies ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

I agree. Men and women should have honor and treat each other respectfully. Sex is not everything in a relationship but it is the overall way of cherishing and treating each other even in the small things. Holding hands, a walk on the beach, a nice dinner together, short travels, movies and so forth...Enjoying the moments with each other to me is more powerful and lasting...A wonderful write...:)........

[Blue]

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Shaquana Adams]

to gain
fleeting approval of men.

Take caution.
Gain wisdom.

Redeem your honor!


Great message here. Nice job! :)

[Blue]

Thank you, Shaquana.

[Shaquana Adams]

You're welcome

[Basu Gupta]

nice work arzel..i like the flow n' the rhyme of your poem..theme was very good n' unique..thanks for sharing

[Blue]

Thank you, Basu!