Oh, woman!

to all women concerned

Glorious descendant of Eve.

Creature shaped after Adam.

Blessed with beauty.

Blessed with heart.

What insult!

What woe to self you inflict!

Degrading.

Detestable.

Inhuman.

Sacred flesh

you now cheaply expose,

feasted upon

by eyes void of chastity.

Unlawful acts

you shamelessly conduct

to satiate

carnal pleasures

to gain

fleeting approval of men.

Take caution.

Gain wisdom.

Redeem your honor!

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

What woe to self you inflict... Ain't that the truth? A wise and thoughtful piece, Blue!

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Rita!

[AYVID N]

It must leave an emptiness inside. Falling in their own eyes. Women are meant for far greater things. You wrote excellently well Arzel Joy! A pleasure to read you always.

[Blue]

And a pleasure to read your reviews,too, Divya. Thank you so much!

[Donald]

There is a big difference between physical and spiritual beliefs. You take both into account beautifully.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Donald!

[Donald]

Your boyfriend is lucky to have someone like you in their life.

[Blue]

If he exists! Hahaha.

[Blue]

If he exists! Hahaha.

[Donald]

The one thing that I enjoy is the laughter of an intelligent woman who remain mysterious to the very end.

[Blue]

I'm no longer mysterious. I had just revealed my true name, had I knot? :)

[Blue]

Haha. I spelled 'not' as 'knot'! Maybe I'm not so intelligent after all. Hahahaha.

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

wonderful ... Very powerful

[Blue]

Thank you so much!

[ron]

Well done. It's true that in the past and even today to many look to the outside beauty and not what is on the inside.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Ron!

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Tina Louise UK]

Powerful piece hun...I never could understand how some women could be that way :) x

[Blue]

Thank you, Tia!

[Brook]

Wonderful write, very powerful.
I see the religious reference at the start, great job.

[Blue]

Thank you, Brookly!

[A. Amos]

Joy you created a magic in this piece, reading your work is truly a joy thank you for sharing

[Blue]

Thank you, Amos!

[A. Amos]

Welcome my dear