Before you go

Before you go

A Poem by Blue
"

Please bear this in mind

"
Before you go

...look at me in the eyes
like when we first met.
...hold me in your arms
in a way I'll never forget.
...intertwine our hands
just like last Valentine.
...kiss my lips
as if you're forever mine.

Before you go

...think of me
and how I dearly love you.
...remember us
and all that we've been through.
...rewind everything
from beginning until today.
...pause the moment
you promised me you'd stay.

Before you go

...bring with you
the picture of my face.
...look at it
when you're lost in a maze.
...travel far and wide
but 'home' you will never see.
...know, please know
you can always come back to me.

© 2014 Blue


Author's Note

Blue
Original link: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/arzeljoy_blu/1288089/

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You're writing is amazing Blue, You sound like a poem that has books on shelves you are AMAZING!
I love this piece it's so romantic, full of hope, full of emotion and has great meaning behind every line.
I love the rhyme scheme and the way you have set it out.
GREAT WRITE!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Cimmy. You are sweet.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Years Ago

you are most welcome :) I try :P



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This is beautiful. You are a very talented writer.

I haven't written poetry in a long time, but it definitely holds a special place in my heart. This was very touching. Keep it up! I'll have to share some of mine. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Madalyn!
You're writing is amazing Blue, You sound like a poem that has books on shelves you are AMAZING!
I love this piece it's so romantic, full of hope, full of emotion and has great meaning behind every line.
I love the rhyme scheme and the way you have set it out.
GREAT WRITE!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Cimmy. You are sweet.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Years Ago

you are most welcome :) I try :P

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Added on January 29, 2014
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