Boy and Girl

 

Boy and girl

Underneath the tree are a girl and a boy,

Inside their heart is love,

Between them is the wall of life,

Under them lay green grass,

Past ignoring love they now embrace it,

In their hands are each others,

Near them children awe and wish they where her,

Beside him she lets go of his hand,

After the children are gone they join hands again,

During the time when the children where there she feels embarrassed,

Except when children are there they hold hands and enjoy the company of one another,

For him everything is a piece of cake,

Without each other they are incomplete,

With each other they are the other piece of their life’s jigsaw puzzles,

Until they part, love is all they have for each other.

 

Author's Note

It was a school project, but I found myself loving it. :]

Reviews

[Meredith Leigh]

I love it too! It's so cute, and I love the imagery. It's like it's telling a story, and I really do love it. Really great job! So cute!

- Kriss

[Cam]

This love is so wonderful.
I am certainly in love with this

[.]

Filled with love
I liked it, such a cute write! :P

[Reaganwriter]

I liked this, short but good.

[hiralarious]

Aw, so sweet(:
Great poem

[mae-mae<3]

This is so cute! I love this. It would steal anyone's heart, as I see below me. Lol. Some parts were a little confusing but that could be because I need to go to bed. :D. Stay Beutiful!

-Mae

[Malachite]

Very sweet poem, I love the metaphors you used!

[Stephanie]

That is so adorably sweet! Fits right in with valentine's day too. Great piece :)

[Taylor H]

aw thats cute and a very nice poem

[Paul Pruett]

I enjoyed this piece, a lot. It has a great heart at its center. We should never loose that ability of a child to love with out limits, with out embarrassment. Totally and completely.