Unnecessary doubts

When someone is perfect, selfquestioning becomes inevitable

Don't
Just don't ever say you won't
Means it crossed your mind
One bridge too far

Don't ever
Fill half
Of the whole
Awaiting inside

Weakness remains
Uncured
Due missing letters
Compiling one word

Don't speak
The words of comfort
When eyes reject
All the spoken

Don't think
I didn't see
Haven't heard
All that is felt

Don't feel blamed
By words of mind
Discovering
How to be loved

Give time
Evade space
To let grow
All seeds

Don't cut
Ungrown
As blood will flood
Unstopped

Let be
The minds' wonders
Of intern battles
One cannot stir

Have faith
Cherish trust
In believing
All is well

Know yourself
Recognize facts
One cannot be more
Than perfection itself

Author's Note

Please review! Learning is exploring!

Reviews

[idiotproof--1]

I really like this poem (again you could probably change some of the spacing) this is a really good piece I love how you ended it I also liked how you used the dame idea to start a lot of the different parts "don't, don't ever, don't speak, don't think etc." overall it's really good

[A.E. Danero]

Hi!! Thank you for your comment and tip! I never tought of spaces that way and while rereading I noticed what you mean, I will definitely keep that in mind whilst writing the next one. Again thank you!! I will read yours soon!
Regards, Ayla