Feelings and selfishness

Feelings and selfishness almost always come together

Walking into a new room,

seeing the possibility.

I know I am walking towards my doom,

because of my incapability.

It is very nice to meet you,

Coming in here out of the blue.

Succeeding in making me blind,

You should watch both ways before crossing my mind.

I never made you the ruler of this place,

So why are you still here every time I close my eyes?

I can't seem to find my own pace,

So does that mean once again I am lead to my demise?

Why are you like the rest?

is the world giving me the usual test?

I'm sick and tired of being controlled.

loneliness is my best friend till the day I become mold.

Author's Note

I wish for you to criticize me in any way possible. Thanks in advance!

Reviews

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Mmm...Concept here is a good one...probably an advise from elder but you presented it in a rhymed poetic way...or maybe you just penned down a quick write....all the way it's a good read! If you're thanked in advance I welcome you😊

[Ady Boblil]

I'm truly sorry that I respond only 7 months after you've written your comment, but thank you! I truly thank you for taking the time to comment on my piece. I only ever write when ever I feel like it, mostly a strong feeling overcomes me and I have a need for it. Have a great day!

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You have a great day too! You're welcome :)