The purity of love

The purity of love

A Poem by Adrian Smith

Love is pure
The night is pouring
Especially yours for sure,
Cause you and I are souring.
Love is so pure
The time stops as we touch
As I make the first score
I love when you blush.
Love is pure
You leave your body as it stimulates your mind
I know it's you that I adore
As the sun goes through the blind

© 2009 Adrian Smith


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Very sensual and beautiful piece. The intensity of love. I think that your words flowed very beautifully...like summer rain off a beautiful deltoid leaf. I was intrigued with each line. Excellent read. Keep exercising your gift.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Adrian Smith
Adrian Smith

Newport, RI



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I love to write and sing. Very shy, fun and loving. I'm easy to get along with.I don't like being in front of a lot of people. Like to swim and have fun with friends and family. more..

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