Stolen

I wrote this about my long time friend who I grew up with when I was dealing with his dying in 2011, I wrote this to let out how I felt about it and so I could remember everything that had happened.

I received a call at five

Asking if you were alive

I new not a thing

All I had was hope, that you would answer

Ring, Ring Ring

I left angry voice mails

'Stop this come out! 

People are making awful tales'

I looked on Facebook

You were online

I messaged and I messaged

Rage Rage Rage!

No answers no replies

I needed you to break the lies

7 o'clock I received another call

Asking if I heard the news at all

I lied and answering no not a thing

Hoping this call was to do with a different something

But it was not my luck

We convinced each other for hours it was a joke

The hours passed and the conversation no longer spoke

Ten o'clock I new it was true

I had lost something special

Something, you!

Burst out crying

Couldn't handle my beautiful friend dying

4 months have passed

I still feel the same

Not knowing who to blame

You were stolen at just nineteen

This still makes me angry and still makes me scream

You dont know what you have until its gone

Author's Note

When I wrote this I was just trying to write down what happened and how it made me feel, and every time that I read it it takes me back to that day and those feelings and makes it so I can never forget lewis.

Reviews

[Adam Walzer]

This poem makes me angry which seems be exactly how I should feel about this. You found a way to make the rhymes flow very well with the poem. The words don't seem to be stretched at all. I hope writing helps get it out.

[Leigh]

I found writing to be very therapeutic and I started writing when I lost someone close,this is a very moving and real piece of writing, that I relate to.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree . A very touching poem . I hope all is well...:)

[Dalia]

Wow Adriann this poem is very touching, well rhymed as well
I enjoyed reading it
keep writing
and all my condolences for your loss

[Adriann Piers]

Thankyou for your review, sorry didn't write back straight away, new to the website just getting used to it ill give your stuff a read soon :)

[Dalia]

take your time my friend
I'd love to read your reviews