Right There

Right There

A Poem by Adriani Putri
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This is a poem about society

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Right there, right there
As they pointing out fingers
At people they don't even know

Right there, right there
As they whisper things
They don't even understand

Right there, right there
As they writing prose
Make it sound like news

Right there, right there
As they take pictures
Of a dead body
And leave it there rotten

© 2015 Adriani Putri


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Adriani Putri
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Raw truth conveyed in this profound brevity! Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


what i like the most about this poem is that it is very honest,direct and the message is very clear.Keep writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words hold a deep, dark music that reveals so much about the world around us; society that too often points the finger at others, but rarely seeks mercy, or love, or justice. Amazing insights. xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There are people like this and that's a shame.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Society is often complicated, greedy and judgmental. Society is often harsh and cruel, voicing opinions that should rather be kept to themselves. It's best just to keep to yourself, that way you stay out of trouble.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 19, 2015
Last Updated on July 22, 2015
Tags: social, humanity, poetry

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Adriani Putri
Adriani Putri

Jakarta, East Jakarta, Indonesia



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Was born on August 26, 1996 I write about humanity and all the things happen around me. I'm Indonesian. I'm looking for publisher who accepts satire, social humanity, non-fiction writing, and al.. more..

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